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| MBJem 2008-04-15 ch 2, | abuseHi That is a great fiction story i think if there is a comic book that is called manhart brother's i would read it because that is so interesting okay im writing a story like that at the moment when its done you should realy read it it give's lot's of info so dose your's the only problem i found is that for beginer's it may be to long okay that's all i got to tell you bye from MBJem PS i loved it like i loved it as the story was great |