Great visualization in this. Loved the image it painted in my mind.

silent

Amazing imagery.

So much in such a small space. Keep writing like this, there's nothing you can do wrong.

Cae

so much said in such few words... captivating

Beautiful work, there's not much else I can note here-your words are just so filled with imagery, its almost glittery on paper if you can sort of understand what I mean lol

I love this piece; keep up the amazing writing!

So true!

And yet another poem I can't critique! Well congrats for that!

P.S. I love the titles of your poems, the draw the readers in.

Luna Turner

Too true. You're work is beautiful. It's amazing how you can express so much with so little words..

You have such an overwhelming talent. Everything you write is amazing!

THIS POEM ROCKS! CHECK MINE OUT!

/IWILLDIEALONE

very nice piece. impressive how it says so much in so few lines...

yes, i could tell you were in that kind of mood.

but good job,

and like im sure you've heard,

i do wish it was a bit longer!

-sv

i like it but i got kind of lost on the piont but its great bases so far.

it's cool,

I really, really love this piece, the recklesness between these two people is so fascinating, and the connection that you present with these two strangers. I just love it. Keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.