Fascinating. They way you wrote it, I expect it has nothing else, yet I still feel like I'm waiting for the next chapter to the cliffhanger. Personally, I liked the 2nd one a bit better, but they were both excellent.

This one is interesting, where you feeling a bit sad when you wrote it? A little depressing, but that's just my opinion. Good job =)

Me again. The first on who speaks is the female, correct?

Hey, me again. Good piece.

Sorry I can't log in, I don't have an account for this site and I clicked the link from FanFiction. This is really good, great job =)

Wow...I liked every one of these short stories, especially the last one. I wanted to know what the bodyguard had seen.

that's pretty awesome! i really like the second one better, but both sound like they would make great stories!

Heya! Finally I get to review... I saved it on a storage device and read it at home last night, and now I'm at my in laws so I can review.

Yeah, I like the second one better. It has more personality, more description, and most importantly, REALLY makes me wanna keep reading. I wish you'd write this one through, too. lol Keep writing!

Jen :D

wow, we do this same sorta thing in a writing club at school, you're given a prompt and you write on it right?

It is short, maybe too short, you can't really critiscize someone's writing if there isn't much to look off of. But you're style is definetely strong. But if the prompt was 'you' are doing something respound to it as yourself.

otherwise I love it

hey that was really good, i liked it a lot!

Ok, that's really sad and kinda twisted. Jenny should have married someone else.

As usual, well written, good detail.

Sorry I don't have much else to say at the moment. I had a very bad night.

Thanks!

hey i totally guessed that right! haha that was pretty cool. sounds like a really fun class, i would like it

oh yes you did fine... I guessed correctly hehe. You could definitely "hear" the female and male in each of them! That was cute, thank you!

I think I enjoyed this exercise the most. In short time I felt a little helpless for Caitlyn, especially when she accepted her treatment at the end. I would be curious to learn more about her relationship to Alex. Are you considering writing a longer story about them, or have you already done so?

I like your exercises and I think that they could be very useful to any writer. The only problem is that they are so short and very hard to get into. I suppose I'll have to go on to your other works.