I like the "torn, scarlet rose". It's quite a simple description but clear. It's not a big issue but I think it would improve the poem to change the comma at the end of the second line to a colon. A colon is often used to introduce an explanation, which is why I think it would be appropriate here.

- Esther, currently reviewing for the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in my profile)

nice:)

first line should have five syllables. it only has four. but it is a very nice poem, except for the syllables. you could say scarlet instead of red to make it right. but you don't have to.
just giving some constructive critisism.

I really like the vivid imagery of this (I mean, what's better to use than a red rose) and how it doesn't follow the traditional haiku format. Though I didn't like the use of 'resembles'... that's kinda implied automatically... but I still liked this. Good job!

-Silence