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Mirabella 2009-09-22 . chapter 1
I like the bits of rhyming. Nicely done. :)
eaststar 2009-09-04 . chapter 1
Gives me that far off feeling... Nice job!
deathtotal9 2009-08-23 . chapter 1
Lovely!
criesinvain 2009-07-01 . chapter 1
This is brilliant - it really conveys this...sense of ominousity (wait, is that even a word?). It shows so much emotion too; in these few words, you can capture a sense of loneliness, and a need of love.

I think?

-elii.
irish-ileana 2009-06-08 . chapter 1
It takes a lot for a haiku to make an impact, but there's definitely something behind this one.
Love the title. ^_^
FaithMemory 2009-06-07 . chapter 1
wow. beautiful.
Steel Winged Angel 2009-04-28 . chapter 1
Haikus are one of my favorite forms of poetry. You did a nice job with this.
lael1bologna 2009-03-25 . chapter 1
This is a good haiku. (but I haven't read much haiku) I liked it though!
Anna Christie 2009-02-20 . chapter 1
I really like this... it captures something mysterious about life... It's like, it doesn't even matter... but it does. And you can be totally alone even in this cast universe... I don't know if I'm making sense, but I adore this piece. It really grabbed me and it's really raw and emotional and just... well, just beautiful. :) *fav*
Leave The Air 2008-12-25 . chapter 1
I love it.
Samantha A. Simon 2008-11-19 . chapter 1
I like the cute simplicity and the rythm. Its a good piece of writing!
RobinAmon 2008-10-24 . chapter 1
very deep, and to make something deep in a few lines is a great talent.
Needa S 2008-10-01 . chapter 1
Wow! Beautifully done. Keep up the awesome work.
Militant Poet 2008-09-23 . chapter 1
ooh! very nice! the simplicity suits the emotion.
Melanie Layugan 2008-07-16 . chapter 1
Wow!
Enchanting.
Nostalgic.
Romantic.
Mesmerizing.

I think I see stars.
Keep writing.
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