 Mirabella 2009-09-22 . chapter 1I like the bits of rhyming. Nicely done. :) |
 eaststar 2009-09-04 . chapter 1Gives me that far off feeling... Nice job! |
 deathtotal9 2009-08-23 . chapter 1Lovely! |
 criesinvain 2009-07-01 . chapter 1This is brilliant - it really conveys this...sense of ominousity (wait, is that even a word?). It shows so much emotion too; in these few words, you can capture a sense of loneliness, and a need of love.
I think?
-elii. |
 irish-ileana 2009-06-08 . chapter 1It takes a lot for a haiku to make an impact, but there's definitely something behind this one.
Love the title. ^_^ |
 FaithMemory 2009-06-07 . chapter 1wow. beautiful. |
 Steel Winged Angel 2009-04-28 . chapter 1Haikus are one of my favorite forms of poetry. You did a nice job with this. |
 lael1bologna 2009-03-25 . chapter 1This is a good haiku. (but I haven't read much haiku) I liked it though! |
 Anna Christie 2009-02-20 . chapter 1I really like this... it captures something mysterious about life... It's like, it doesn't even matter... but it does. And you can be totally alone even in this cast universe... I don't know if I'm making sense, but I adore this piece. It really grabbed me and it's really raw and emotional and just... well, just beautiful. :) *fav* |
 Leave The Air 2008-12-25 . chapter 1I love it. |
 Samantha A. Simon 2008-11-19 . chapter 1I like the cute simplicity and the rythm. Its a good piece of writing! |
 RobinAmon 2008-10-24 . chapter 1very deep, and to make something deep in a few lines is a great talent. |
 Needa S 2008-10-01 . chapter 1Wow! Beautifully done. Keep up the awesome work. |
 Militant Poet 2008-09-23 . chapter 1ooh! very nice! the simplicity suits the emotion. |
 Melanie Layugan 2008-07-16 . chapter 1Wow!
Enchanting.
Nostalgic.
Romantic.
Mesmerizing.
I think I see stars.
Keep writing. |