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| Reviews for Forgive Me If I Fade Away |
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   Marie Rich 11/19/08 . chapter 1I like the cute simplicity and the rythm. Its a good piece of writing! |
| K. Molle 10/24/08 . chapter 1 very deep, and to make something deep in a few lines is a great talent. |
| Needa S 10/1/08 . chapter 1 Wow! Beautifully done. Keep up the awesome work. |
| Militant Poet 9/23/08 . chapter 1 ooh! very nice! the simplicity suits the emotion. |
| Melanie Layugan 7/16/08 . chapter 1 Wow! Enchanting. Nostalgic. Romantic. Mesmerizing. I think I see stars. Keep writing. |
| Dreaming Chica 6/29/08 . chapter 1 Amazing! I love the sense of waiting and wonder the Haiku gives off! Well done! Dreaming Chica |
| kloun mannequin 6/1/08 . chapter 1 it's magical as if there was a boy waiting for his girl from the sky or heaven... |
| no.peace.los.angeles 5/30/08 . chapter 1 Ooh, mysterious indeed. I like how it's left open, and how it still works as a complete poem. Nicely done. Keep writing! :) |
| scarlet stars 5/29/08 . chapter 1 Aww, loved it! :) Brilliant... -A Raindrop's Shadow |
| Peanuts Factory 5/1/08 . chapter 1 It's human nature to want more. Meaningful poem :) |
| ticktockman 5/1/08 . chapter 1 great hiku, short yet effective |
| RedXfire 4/27/08 . chapter 1 i LOVE THE HIKUU I THINK thats how you spell it? i cant write like this for shit, love how you have 18 reviews LOL good job keep up the good work.. PASS the love on about me. |
| instantramen 4/27/08 . chapter 1 I have deep respect for anyone who can write a decent haiku and my dear, you are very good. I dig it. Simple and elegant. |
| Jesse the Storyteller 4/19/08 . chapter 1 Simple and powerful. I always love your poems. I also like your alliteration. The last line leaves a sense of haunting dissapointment. Good work. (But when is your writing not?) -Jesse Behold the review marathon! (link in profile) |
| Maircus 4/19/08 . chapter 1 simple yet striking! ) -Maircus |
