|Reviews for Forgive Me If I Fade Away|
| Marie Rich 11/19/08 . chapter 1
I like the cute simplicity and the rythm. Its a good piece of writing!
| K. Molle 10/24/08 . chapter 1
very deep, and to make something deep in a few lines is a great talent.
| Needa S 10/1/08 . chapter 1
Wow! Beautifully done. Keep up the awesome work.
| Militant Poet 9/23/08 . chapter 1
ooh! very nice! the simplicity suits the emotion.
| Melanie Layugan 7/16/08 . chapter 1
I think I see stars.
| Dreaming Chica 6/29/08 . chapter 1
Amazing! I love the sense of waiting and wonder the Haiku gives off! Well done!
| kloun mannequin 6/1/08 . chapter 1
it's magical as if there was a boy waiting for his girl from the sky or heaven...
| no.peace.los.angeles 5/30/08 . chapter 1
Ooh, mysterious indeed. I like how it's left open, and how it still works as a complete poem. Nicely done. Keep writing! :)
| scarlet stars 5/29/08 . chapter 1
Aww, loved it! :)
-A Raindrop's Shadow
| Peanuts Factory 5/1/08 . chapter 1
It's human nature to want more.
Meaningful poem :)
| ticktockman 5/1/08 . chapter 1
great hiku, short yet effective
| RedXfire 4/27/08 . chapter 1
i LOVE THE HIKUU I THINK thats how you spell it?
i cant write like this for shit, love how you have 18 reviews LOL good job keep up the good work.. PASS the love on about me.
| instantramen 4/27/08 . chapter 1
I have deep respect for anyone who can write a decent haiku and my dear, you are very good. I dig it. Simple and elegant.
| Jesse the Storyteller 4/19/08 . chapter 1
Simple and powerful. I always love your poems. I also like your alliteration. The last line leaves a sense of haunting dissapointment. Good work. (But when is your writing not?)
Behold the review marathon! (link in profile)
| Maircus 4/19/08 . chapter 1
simple yet striking! )