First of all, I can't believe I'm the first person to review this! It's friggin' good people! Tell her so!

I love the dialect. I noticed that for people with English accents, you spelled favour with a u. Clever device. I like the character of O'Malley- Usually such a sweet character is of the male persuasion. It's good to se a change.

Just all around good.

-Stardust.