I really love your style of writing and humor. You blow all the other writers here out of the water. Also, your characters are fricken amazing! They're just too cool for words, yup. Is World Chicken going to be a series kind of thing? Anyways Irish is the **. He's my favorite character so far. Second is La Cervical cancer because his nickname is super funny and he's an enigma. Anyways I hope you will update soon

i honestly love irene. her personality just speaks to me; i find it interesting how she can portray such an unaffected persona and yet be so insecure. anyway, her humor is an exact replica of this one girl i know...it kinda makes me wonder if you know her, too. lol. hope to read more :)

"Sometimes I want to rip off Paul's eyelashes and paste them onto my face"

No joke, I've said basically those exact words before, except what I said was more like "I really wanna rip your eyes out and put them on my face" because I really like my brother's eyes. XD

Anyway, awesome writing, I can really relate, and Irene sounds completely awesome. ^-^

asgdajhakjgfrhej! your story is amazing! i get the tingles inside when i read it.

You are amazing too.
i lvoe irene.
i love rowen and iris too.
jesse can eat muh dick though!

Your description of the race was excellent. I was sorta wondering if all your knowledge of it came from personal experience, or if you had to look the info. for drag racing up?
Anyway, I hope the guy who crashed is okay. =[
Good story so far, looking forward to more!
-Ramen

"...even though I ignored ()im, he kept following us around until I got fed up and invited..."

Forgot an (h).

I think it's a bit sad Irene doesn't care more about people, just in general. But then again, I guess that would mean that she could no longer be the insensitive, say-whatever-she-wants Irene. Good writing, as always.

-Ramen

Okay, I couldn't find any corrections in this chapter. God, the prayer part was just weird. -_-;

As far as the chapter title is concerned, "Phone Call" is supposed to be two words.

"We are going to practice, our routine."
"You guys, must be desperate."

You don't need the commas in those sentences.

lols, Can't believe La Cervical cancer called her on the phone. Creepy, much? Poor Irene...

Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. School/life is getting in the way. Anyways,

"Dude, what are you doing."
Missing a question mark there.

Funny as always, and the thought that her brother was gay had me laughing out loud.

-Ramen

[Should I Know This Person Already?]
the most important mode of all hahaha

[Benzes(eses)]
lmao(eses)

Irene's voice is so obviously THERE in everything she says. It's nice to see a character portrayed that well.

Holy ** I thought he was gay, too... close save.

And i dunno if you intended to do this, but that guy at the WC place made me think of Roman (I hope I remembered the name right =/)

Heh, I did that to my hair once... but it was only blue, green and purple XD Anyway, can't wait for updates

another one of your great stories, and now i'm itching myself in places i shouldn't itch. that's how excited you make me feel with your words. & there are a few typos in the fifth chapter, but it still doesn't dull the gloriousness of the piece. can't wait 'til you update.

ppsshh obnoxious story my **. Your modesty ** me off. If [God forbid] you reach that point where you can't write anymore then just message me the ideas in your head 'cause I love it and will gladly soak over them till I'm satisfied and have paulgasmed six or seven times.

I love the 'gay parade' description, and "Gothic Lolita One and Gothic Lolita Two". And "**" chin lmfao... and it's funny that you made fun of emos/goths and their slight monotony. They can be hard to differentiate. At least you could identify different genders, though; sometimes that's the first obstacle.

"Reina le Fatty" is awesomeo.
That little dialogue about being 'real' with the emo kid made me laugh so hard... I swear, I RARELY read stories where they properly satire that ** noncomformist hippie-ish idea that a lot of people have nowadays.

"Hot Topic code" FOR REALZ if you write about these emo/goths/whatevers being in a bookstore in some other chapter, then you might as well be making a documentary. and i guffawed at the acne part.

[It rippled hypnotically] - funnyfunnyfunny

and I like the glare-down she gets from La Cervical Cancer. LMFAO SHE POKED HIM IN THE NIPPLE

["Jesse. Go out with me or I'll kill your parents."] - that's smooth...

[smugass smugly cat] - nice

and wtf Paul came outta nowhere lmfao that's nice.

Aww why's she crying...? I know it'd be nice and dreamy but if she actually does have a crush on her brother... dayumm that's sorta awesomely whack. or maybe mr. cancer is getting to her. lmfao nevermind

[It all works out. People like Cutty do all the work and people like me are lazy and get away with it. It's like I'm training to be a CEO or something.]

lmfaoo so true, so true..

Irene is so... odd. It's great. I like the way she sees thing... like when the hand rubbed against the window "killer style" and her moving "ninja style." It's just the way she (and by association, you) describes things. She's normal but there's something undeniably weird about her.

And 'gay' is a good word because Iris somehow seems hella fine even though you barely described him, that little gross girly part of me wished they werent twins lmfao.

Ho ho ho. And the plot thickens.

But before I continue, I must first apologize for my lack of insightful and/or motivational reviewing. I'm pretty brain-dead, but I want to write something nice (eventually), so perhaps I'll save the last one. For now, I'm merely endeavoring to boost your review count. And to let you know I'm still a fan of your writing... despite my inconsistencies.