Reviews for World Chicken: How Snobs Happen

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JordiiGirl 2008-07-12 ch 2,	abuseHeh, I did that to my hair once... but it was only blue, green and purple XD Anyway, can't wait for updates
monster dia 2008-07-03 ch 1,	abuseanother one of your great stories, and now i'm itching myself in places i shouldn't itch. that's how excited you make me feel with your words. & there are a few typos in the fifth chapter, but it still doesn't dull the gloriousness of the piece. can't wait 'til you update.
Loly Darko 2008-06-26 ch 5,	abuseppsshh obnoxious story my . Your modesty me off. If [God forbid] you reach that point where you can't write anymore then just message me the ideas in your head 'cause I love it and will gladly soak over them till I'm satisfied and have paulgasmed six or seven times. I love the 'gay parade' description, and "Gothic Lolita One and Gothic Lolita Two". And "" chin lmfao... and it's funny that you made fun of emos/goths and their slight monotony. They can be hard to differentiate. At least you could identify different genders, though; sometimes that's the first obstacle. "Reina le Fatty" is awesomeo. That little dialogue about being 'real' with the emo kid made me laugh so hard... I swear, I RARELY read stories where they properly satire that noncomformist hippie-ish idea that a lot of people have nowadays. "Hot Topic code" FOR REALZ if you write about these emo/goths/whatevers being in a bookstore in some other chapter, then you might as well be making a documentary. and i guffawed at the acne part. [It rippled hypnotically] - funnyfunnyfunny and I like the glare-down she gets from La Cervical Cancer. LMFAO SHE POKED HIM IN THE NIPPLE ["Jesse. Go out with me or I'll kill your parents."] - that's smooth... [smugass smugly cat] - nice and wtf Paul came outta nowhere lmfao that's nice. Aww why's she crying...? I know it'd be nice and dreamy but if she actually does have a crush on her brother... dayumm that's sorta awesomely whack. or maybe mr. cancer is getting to her. lmfao nevermind
Loly Darko 2008-06-26 ch 4,	abuse[It all works out. People like Cutty do all the work and people like me are lazy and get away with it. It's like I'm training to be a CEO or something.] lmfaoo so true, so true.. Irene is so... odd. It's great. I like the way she sees thing... like when the hand rubbed against the window "killer style" and her moving "ninja style." It's just the way she (and by association, you) describes things. She's normal but there's something undeniably weird about her. And 'gay' is a good word because Iris somehow seems hella fine even though you barely described him, that little gross girly part of me wished they werent twins lmfao.
EnigmaticArsenic 2008-06-25 ch 4,	abuseHo ho ho. And the plot thickens. But before I continue, I must first apologize for my lack of insightful and/or motivational reviewing. I'm pretty brain-dead, but I want to write something nice (eventually), so perhaps I'll save the last one. For now, I'm merely endeavoring to boost your review count. And to let you know I'm still a fan of your writing... despite my inconsistencies.
EnigmaticArsenic 2008-06-25 ch 3,	abuseDude, I'm so dumb. The page didn't finish loading. Lmao.
EnigmaticArsenic 2008-06-25 ch 2,	abuseWow. What the hell am I doing here? Once, Aaron and I thought to buy some beta fish and like, let 'em loose on each other and take bets to the winner. Kinda like ** fighting minus the barbecue afterwards... But then we found out they cost like, sixty bucks a piece off the internet, plus shipping and handling. I think we ended up going out for pasta instead. Anyway, I'm loving your main character. She seems like the kind of person I would end up (through no fault of my own) getting along with. I read this a while back and just moseyed on over to check for an update, but sadly... :( (That is to say, get back to work, woman.)
silver-teardropz 2008-06-25 ch 3,	abuseAnother great chapter. That Paul kid reminds me of my little brother... except my brother has found the function on his PSP that actually lets him talk to other players during a game. It's funny to watch. Anyway, next chapter, here I go. -S.
silver-teardropz 2008-06-25 ch 2,	abuseProbably the most (insert modern slang here: killer, epic, sick...) first chapter I have read in a long time on this site. Your character has pretty much drawn me in and locked me up; I adore her nonsensical qualities, and the style you write her in is captivating. Well, not much more to say other than: on to the next chapter! -S.
Ramenluver 2008-06-25 ch 5,	abuserofl, Paul just randomly pops up. Yay, nice twist. I thought the girls might belong to La Cerva. ;)The ending was nice, and I didn't pick up on any spelling errors. -Ramen
Let Them Eat Cake 2008-06-25 ch 5,	abuse"Smugass smugly cat." I LOVE that line! I see a little more of a plot coming out, so I'll be patient still! :D I liked this chapter and I'm interested to see what's going to happen. Jesse-Irene or La Cervical Cancer-Irene. Suspense! Update soon, por favor! :D -Kay (Let Them Eat Cake) (Sorry I'm not really noticing any error in spelling or whatever. I'm reading this for fun because it's just a very funny story! :D)
Ramenluver 2008-06-24 ch 4,	abuse"Though... Iris has his days he's icy as Antarctica, and it's a little more scary than him being affectionate." Put a "when" between "days" and "he's". The last sentence was a little...random, maybe? I really like Iris so far. Seems like an interesting character, indeed. And I enjoyed the whole katana bit. ^ ^ -Ramen
Let Them Eat Cake 2008-06-24 ch 4,	abuseThat's a slightly bizarre thought... I like Iris. He seems pretty darn awesome! Just visiting his sister in the middle of the night? I'm lucky if my brother notices me in the morning! Interesting chapter. I just don't know where this story is going. But you probably have some fantastic plan, so I'll wait for it. :D -Kay (Let Them Eat Cake)
Ramenluver 2008-06-22 ch 3,	abuseLove it so far. XD I really enjoy her narrating, and the writing style is ideal for the story, I think. No grammatical errors so far, but then again, my grammar isn't all that wonderful. ^ ^' Update soon, please. ^ ^ -Ramen
murderprotocol 2008-06-18 ch 3,	abuseHoly **, Joan, you updated! I cannot tell you how long I've waited for this. And how hard can it be to write? It's brilliant. Honestly, I should learn to review better, but I'm just going to fangirl, because I love this, I do. I totally want to be able to write like this. All you characters, as crazy as they might be, are so incredibly real they could be breathing and sitting right beside me, telling me to fix my face - which, by the way, is one of the best comebacks ever. The description of Paul was just marvellous, Iris is damn cool, I'm already in love with Cutty and Lana - LOL. That stuff about Boyz II Men is true, though. And I love that although it may seems like a lot of random events thrown together, it all flows. It all makes sense. Joan, I love you, I do. Don't you dare stop writing ever. I'll shut up now and bask in your glow while I do my own writing. :)

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