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| Chip Douglas 2008-05-04 ch 1,  | abuseWow. I like the way you chose to rhyme in couplets even though the form was very free - it was like making some sense out of the nonsense we've made out of this world (does that make sense?) ;) I wonder why you chose the Arnold Sshwarzenegger on TV line, unless you feel like that's a global issue. I like the poem - fantastic! |