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Reviews For: Child's Conversation with Mr One

Andrea Lotte
2008-04-08
ch 1,
abuseI'm really confused. I don't really understand any of it. But I really like the way it sounds. If you read it out it would sound wonderful. I just don't get it. I'm sorry!
Tytherpol
2008-04-07
ch 1,
abuseamazing.
i wish i could write prose half as awesomely as you do.
East-0f-Eden
2008-04-07
ch 1,
abuseI'm not sure of the point you're trying to get across. But, you're last line was stellar. It was philospical.
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