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| Jayjack 2008-06-26 ch 1,  | abuseEE! that was adorable. |
| Lily Llynn 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseI generally like cliche, but I don't like cliche as much in this situation because it went from really angsty to as you said, sap. But it is sweet and pretty well-written, so I am glad that Queen of Absolutely Everything added this to our c2. (: |
| xLittleBlackConverse. 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseWhen I first started reading this oneshot I was pretty much convinced it was going to be a bittersweet ending, where he would end up watching her happily getting married to another guy. But I'm so glad you gave it a happy ending, I'm a total sap too. I really liked how you described the lines and everything. The way you write is amazing and beautiful. cheers! |
| CarlyJo 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseSappiness is great! Exellent job! ~Carly =:3 ) |
| FizzyTwilight 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was pretty lovely =D |
| x3life 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abuseomg this was so cute!! i totally loved it =) haha. even though it was expected from the begining that this was gonna happen. *heart* |
| White Rose Blossom 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abuseCuute :D -Aria |
| Noie 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseI REALLY liked this one! You did a great job, even though it had a very simple style. Great one-shot! I'd love to read more. |