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| Schizophrenic.iv-personalit... 2008-04-19 ch 1,  | abuseyou have a very intriguing way of writing, and the feel of this poem is perfect in all its simplicity. The end is just perfect, the way it explains what has happened without saying really saying it at all. Very good work. |
| Jennifer 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseI thought it was disgusting at first, because it was about old people, then i read the last stanza. It's wonderful. And now so disgusting now. It's beautiful. It made me sad that he hadd to die. This was beautiful. |
| doctor's diagnosis 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseThat is such a tragic poem. Beautifully written of course, and an amazing way to phrase the loss of a loved one. |
| losing gracie girl 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abusethis has a nice metallic feel to it. i like they way the words are rolling around my head after i read it. yours until the wind changes, gg |