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| Moondog Dozier 2008-04-23 ch 1,  | abuseI like the complexity of this work. The mind shifts work well. Any work that has brett favre in it has to be good, didn't know you were a football fan. The ebbs that this has are excellent, it has a rocking chair sound, which is something i strive for alot, and is a good thing to capture. It sways back and forth to the sound i mean. Well written. MD:77. |
| she smolders 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseI've always been drawn to how your poems can jump from one idea to the next so quickly, but so smoothly. Not a lot of people could use such random, lovely objects or people or phrases in their poetry and make it sound brilliant at the same time. I don't have the time to read poems as much as I used too so reading some of your's now is like remember how to feel. Take care. |
| Jennifer 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abuseI like the last line. that was funny. the poem was just fine. i liked it. but..what song were you listening to? |