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A. James Robin 2008-04-13 ch 1,	abuseI thought that 'What If' was pretty good. The one thing that i liked about it was that it was short and to the point instead of long and repetitive. If there was anything about it that i didn't like, it is probably that it is almost a little too dark, but i suppose that's what you were trying to do. If i could offer some advice, i would say that it is okay to write about dark feelings sometimes, but it does get a little old when used too much. As for this individual poem, i think that it works. Good work.
simpleplan13 2008-04-12 ch 1,	abuseinteresting... I like the ending. The thing about the choice is interesting too, but the "What if I didn't".. you don't I mean it''s obvious you dont have a choice about being conceived. Other than that... really well done.
Tee Elle Double Yew 2008-04-08 ch 1,	abuseHow morbid... lol. I like it.
Princess-anna57 2008-04-07 ch 1,	abuseQuite pessimistic, isn't it. But well written. Good job. Write on. ~Anna~
kloun doll 2008-04-07 ch 1,	abuseits amazing, I like what you mean.