Reviews for the difference between losing and taking away

Moondog Dozier 2008-04-23 ch 1,	abuseMarvelous voice in this. The reader can sense the strong hesitations that exist. "hellbent on screwing-the pooch", is an excellent use of everyday language to engage the reader with known references. The song identification at the end is appreciated. I'm always looking for meaningful music to listen to. MD:77.
Jennifer 2008-04-08 ch 1,	abusewow. i really like this. i love the use of imagery here. the last line for the 2nd one, does that mean that they kill her? i also like the songs that you put in there. over all, it's really good!