i hope you finish the story! it was acctually pretty good so far

Seems like this could be very good. Update soon please!

I liked it. Has potential. Just remember, you don't need ' ' with thoughts, they're simply in italics. Keep it up and update soon.
Faith

loved it, cant wait for more!

I like it, good prologue. Draws the reader in. Keep it up and update soon :)
Faith