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Reviews For: Secrets

Kanilla 2008-06-29 ch 6,	abuseFirst of all, let me just emphasize how MUCH I loved and enjoyed reading this. The words flowed so beautifully, and quite expertly, when I read this piece. And no matter how full of angst and depression and harmful things it became it was never -too- much, but just enough to send me spiralling into heartbreak over and over again. I love David as a character with all his ghosts and skeletons, and his pain. You must have a lot of patience to be able to write this through, and I admire your skill. Absolutely beautiful. -Kanilla
SanJ 2008-05-28 ch 6, anon.	abusekudos on writing such a beautiful & poignant story. It brought tears to my eyes. Thank you.
catseye348 2008-05-23 ch 6,	abusethank you thank you thankyou thankyou! it was so good, i absolutly love this story! sequal?
Qui 2008-05-20 ch 6,	abuseIt was pretty good. You did a fine job of carrying the angst right through to the end of your story. happy fuzzy endings? Sure! happy fuzzy ANGSTY endings.
Kaybug150 2008-05-10 ch 5,	abuseThis story is amazing. Beautiful writing. It's made me cry a number of times while reading it. I've actually quoted it before. (People look at me like I'm nuts because of it, but whatever.) Write the next part quickly, please.
catseye348 2008-05-05 ch 5,	abuseoh thank god! please please please have david meet phillip again, the desperation (that you write so well) has me choked up all chapter then crying at the end. i can't wait for the next chapter, even if it has me crying again!
catseye348 2008-04-24 ch 4,	abuseyou make me cry every time! the pain David is going through is gut wrenching! he needs Phillip to finction and he's alive! when he finds out he's never going to talk to katie again...it would be better for David to know that Phillip is comatose, atleast that way he would have a real person to talk to instead of the apparations. are the apparations phillip trying to tell David that he's still alive or just David's splintered mond not daling with his lover's death? can't wait for the next chapter!
catseye348 2008-04-19 ch 3,	abuseyou are amazing at making me cry!(a good thing, you write the anguish so well) i really hope that Katie will finally tell someone who will tell David that Phillip is alive, he desperatly needs him... i can't wait for the next chapter! thank you for these characters again
Qui 2008-04-14 ch 2,	abuseHave a little story with your angst? It's certianly something I haven't quite seen the like of before, though that might have more to do with my avoidance of really angsty stories. I'm guessing its a good thing that I read Emralds a long time ago, and thus am currently lacking that level of attachment to these characters. uh... keep writing, keep posting, and, um, keep angsting? Qui
catseye348 2008-04-12 ch 2,	abusethis better make Katie tell him the truth! i dont' think i've ever been this close to crying on a second chapter of an ongoing story! please please please please update soon!
catseye348 2008-04-08 ch 1,	abuse"he dialed it doen to a rediculously low dosage" phillip did, which means he's alive. "for what she'd done" Katie didn't kill philip, she just told David that he was dead... PHILLIP'S ALIVE! i really really hope so...
firestar267 2008-04-08 ch 1,	abuseOh this was so sad! Veyr well written well, you have handled it very well. Im extremely curious as to the plot twist. Cant wait for more!

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