well its would make an amazing book but as a short story it still feels like it has a few loose ends but over all i like it

I remember you reading this and I thought it was really good. Maybe you could expand on the story and make it longer- or into a novel. It has great potential. My thought is that instead of him waking up, make it into an adventure which isn't just a dream. It's up to you.
Keep writing!
Zach

I'd like to know more about the space pirates, what they look like and what makes them alien. If that makes sense. I think the world you have created has potential to be expanded on as well. It's a shame Ark woke up and it was just a dream though. I was looking forward to him getting his own back.

Dude, i liked it! It has great potential. Update soon. Oh and chap 2 of my story should be out soon, so keep an eye out for it!