I don't like how she's letting him make all the decisions. Don't like it one bit. She goes there and pretends she will stand up to him for once. But if she were actually standing up to him, she would let him come to her. It seems like she's begging for his attention. And he's so damn arrogant. Argghh, it just makes me angry.
As if kissing her and telling her he has feelings for her is fair but not dating her is. :|

BTW. We'll play it by ear should not make her smile. She should be laying down the rules and telling him where to go.
:P

Sorry for my rant. I just really don't like guys like Jess even if his intentions are "noble". And the way Aubrey's just eating up. :( Very disappointing but I can't change your character's personality, can I? ;)

I like how real this is though. Not everyone can be the ideal person.

wat is up with the mama drama?? why does she owe her? its a bit creepy for a woman her age to be dressed up and ordered around by her mommy

Hi,
I have been reading your stories for quite a while now. I am a vivid FF reader, but at the end of the week I always come back to read your stories over and over again. I think that you are an amazing writer and look forward to reading more of your stories in the future. What strikes me is that you are from Indiana too and coincidentally I live in West Lafayette, Indiana. Well anyways, thank you for sharing your writing with us and I hope you all the best in the future. :D

You are seriously one of my favorite authors on this site, without a doubt. I definitely liked this little sequel/spinoff.

LOVE IT! seriously though, this whole addition thing isnt helping out with all the updates from other stories im reading, im like ya ill get to those in a sec, gotta finish this story =D

Hiya

great story. I love reading your stories. At the bottom of this chapter you talk about deadliest catch. Funny enough, my husband is watching it while i read. Of course i can't help but watch it. Its a great show.

Are you going to do a story using the deadliest catch?

Angel

Can I ask for more of this one? I love it so! Great job... off to read more!!

xoxo
jennie

Yeah... we do need fluff.. I love it

Mom scares me... Aubrey needs to move in with him and be happy...

xoxo
jennie

yes... they will work out! Can't wait to see how it all pans out!!

xoxo
jennie

no no no he's not!!

love it

xoxo
jennie

Love the first chapter! I understand what you mean about getting out from under one! Can't wait to read more!!

nice sequel. will we hear about derrick?

I LOVED IT! sorry that i haven't been reading your stories in a long time! (i don't know if that's the right english lol)

please keep writing - i love your stories!!

I liked that she went back to singing in the end, that was a good thing.

Congrats on the nomination! I'm voting!
Well, that was short...sorry!
xx

ok so i'm not sure about how i feel about the ending. it seems a tad rushed...BUT i do love how you kept it open ended.
will there be a sequel?