This was really good.
It was sad, but powerful.
I liked it.

[It’s and ugly old shoe box. That seemed fitting.]

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[Please, I was just being stupid. I’m sorry and I never mea]

- You seem to be missing a couple of words here.

This was powerful. I enjoyed it very much, sure, the small mistakes withered down its emotion a bit, but those can be easily fixed. I suggest a line break maybe, when you switch from the girl to the guy. It can make things clearer - but if you don't do that, maybe you could add more transition.

interesting idea! I think it could be extended into an excellent chaptered story, but it works well as a one-shot!

That's weird and sad and very interesting idea. It makes me wish it was more than a one-shot.

Were we feeling deep today? I like these two.

Very nice! This story was rather bittersweet...but at the same time, it had humor. The line "It looks like it was attacked by the tape monster" was the one that got me. Brilliant!

The male character was especially real. I could just imagine him there with his tape...

All in all, it was a good story. Well written, few grammatical mistakes...Great!