this is beautiful. You have an eye for the right word choice.

This is so sad, part of me wanted to cry. But the poem is very beautiful. Nice job.

XKristie MarieX

I realy lked this! I liked how you arranged your poem, and how the words flowed! You're good with that!

I like the words you use to express your feelings, and how you end the poem with a final sentence in a paragraph alone. This poem is filled with emotion, and well-written, I think!

Keep at it!

The Reverse Edge Blade

beautiful :)