|Reviews for Filled chocolate|
| Candace Jane 6/10/08 . chapter 1
this is beautiful. You have an eye for the right word choice.
| XxXKristie MarieXxX 4/10/08 . chapter 1
This is so sad, part of me wanted to cry. But the poem is very beautiful. Nice job.
| The Reverse Edge Blade 4/9/08 . chapter 1
I realy lked this! I liked how you arranged your poem, and how the words flowed! You're good with that!
I like the words you use to express your feelings, and how you end the poem with a final sentence in a paragraph alone. This poem is filled with emotion, and well-written, I think!
Keep at it!
The Reverse Edge Blade
| Black peeches 4/8/08 . chapter 1