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Candace Jane
2008-06-10
ch 1,
abusethis is beautiful. You have an eye for the right word choice.
XxXKristie marieXxX
2008-04-10
ch 1,
abuseThis is so sad, part of me wanted to cry. But the poem is very beautiful. Nice job.


XKristie MarieX
The Reverse Edge Blade
2008-04-09
ch 1,
abuseI realy lked this! I liked how you arranged your poem, and how the words flowed! You're good with that!
I like the words you use to express your feelings, and how you end the poem with a final sentence in a paragraph alone. This poem is filled with emotion, and well-written, I think!
Keep at it!
The Reverse Edge Blade
Black peeches
2008-04-08
ch 1,
abusebeautiful :)
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