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| Candace Jane 2008-06-10 ch 1,  | abusethis is beautiful. You have an eye for the right word choice. |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is so sad, part of me wanted to cry. But the poem is very beautiful. Nice job. XKristie MarieX |
| The Reverse Edge Blade 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseI realy lked this! I liked how you arranged your poem, and how the words flowed! You're good with that! I like the words you use to express your feelings, and how you end the poem with a final sentence in a paragraph alone. This poem is filled with emotion, and well-written, I think! Keep at it! The Reverse Edge Blade |
| Black peeches 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abusebeautiful :) |