This poem is really well written. The imagery and descriptions brought back a lot of memories for me. Why not put a description in? Well done!

Wow, I like this poem a lot, although I think you should have something other than a full stop in your synopsis thingy - sometimes to get readers you need more than just the title, no? :) But your wording was excellent, but I do feel that you could have had more lines, and made you 'i's capitalised, 'cause it just looks so much better when you do. aye? :D

This is such a beautiful poem. The imagery is amazing; my favorite part was, "the perfume of newly turned earth, rich with rain; the pungent aroma of woodsmoke, pregnant with memory". This gives the impression that there was some horrible event, possibly weather-related. Like there was a great rain storm and then a fire that destoryed everything.


I don't know, I'm rambling...I try to overanalyze poems, anywways GREAT WORK!