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| kisses-and-gasoline 2008-04-22 ch 1,  | abuse'I crossed you out Over yesterday's bookmarks' I really, really like this one! The feeling of emptiness in the subject is a nice contrast to the rich description... |
| East-0f-Eden 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abusei love your first stanza and your word choice. |
| lost for words 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abuseI love the imagery and metaphors here. I was going to quote favourite parts, but there are too many stunning lines. Deep, really hit home. |
| kloun doll 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abuseI like this: You ran your tracks all over me like a derailed train and I, a lost engine stayed put in the middle of nowhere. it's a goodm poem. |