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| Jubbles Bubbles 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseI like the rithym on this one. I like the way you mixed music and dance and passion in this poetry. |
| Yellow Duvet 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseAww ... so bittersweet. Great job, the emotions are very strong in this poem and your words were chosen so carefully and are so effective. A fave, I think. |
| ode to a nightingale 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseO_o This reminds me of Bill and Tom. Then again, everything nowadays kinda does. Anyway, I really like this, love it actually. You combined such a strong love (to believe-but-not-really in it I have to think of it as Bill/Tom ;P) with music and the last line fits so perfectly (although, I think you should have a dot after the last line). To sum it all up, this is amazing and I love it and I'm adding it to my favorites. xD |
| Faith Adeline 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abuseI liked this, I felt it conveyed emotion well. Good piece. Faith |