I like the rithym on this one. I like the way you mixed music and dance and passion in this poetry.

Aww ... so bittersweet. Great job, the emotions are very strong in this poem and your words were chosen so carefully and are so effective. A fave, I think.

O_o

This reminds me of Bill and Tom. Then again, everything nowadays kinda does. Anyway, I really like this, love it actually. You combined such a strong love (to believe-but-not-really in it I have to think of it as Bill/Tom ;P) with music and the last line fits so perfectly (although, I think you should have a dot after the last line).

To sum it all up, this is amazing and I love it and I'm adding it to my favorites. xD

I liked this, I felt it conveyed emotion well. Good piece.

Faith