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Reviews For: Stay the Night

Jubbles Bubbles
2008-05-28
ch 1,
abuseI like the rithym on this one. I like the way you mixed music and dance and passion in this poetry.
Yellow Duvet
2008-04-10
ch 1,
abuseAww ... so bittersweet. Great job, the emotions are very strong in this poem and your words were chosen so carefully and are so effective. A fave, I think.
ode to a nightingale
2008-04-10
ch 1,
abuseO_o

This reminds me of Bill and Tom. Then again, everything nowadays kinda does. Anyway, I really like this, love it actually. You combined such a strong love (to believe-but-not-really in it I have to think of it as Bill/Tom ;P) with music and the last line fits so perfectly (although, I think you should have a dot after the last line).

To sum it all up, this is amazing and I love it and I'm adding it to my favorites. xD
Faith Adeline
2008-04-08
ch 1,
abuseI liked this, I felt it conveyed emotion well. Good piece.
Faith
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