|Reviews for Stay the Night|
| Jubbles Bubbles 5/28/08 . chapter 1
I like the rithym on this one. I like the way you mixed music and dance and passion in this poetry.
| Yellow Duvet 4/10/08 . chapter 1
Aww ... so bittersweet. Great job, the emotions are very strong in this poem and your words were chosen so carefully and are so effective. A fave, I think.
| a certain slant of light 4/10/08 . chapter 1
This reminds me of Bill and Tom. Then again, everything nowadays kinda does. Anyway, I really like this, love it actually. You combined such a strong love (to believe-but-not-really in it I have to think of it as Bill/Tom ;P) with music and the last line fits so perfectly (although, I think you should have a dot after the last line).
To sum it all up, this is amazing and I love it and I'm adding it to my favorites. xD
| Faith Adeline 4/8/08 . chapter 1
I liked this, I felt it conveyed emotion well. Good piece.