Ha! Ha-ha-ha! Certainly an interesting take on... oh, fuck it, I'll say it, this is one of the more creative things I've ever read. And, simply, thank you. Dear God, it takes a stempeded of whild horses to drag anything this good/cool/funny/cute/whatever out of writers anymore! -- that's where the thanks came into play, there. Anyway, I feel like I total fag oogling this when you're all EEH (read your profile -- meh...) about "this operation," but I don't give a shit, I'm favoriting it. Ha!

This is such a fasinating idea! Now I'm curious, I really want to know more about the cards and mixing them up. I just love original ideas about the after life. Simply amazing.

wow.

"‘Being an expert’ at something was one thing that Nine recalled very affectionately from its times as a human. There were no experts amongst slugs." - ehehehe, made me laugh. I love your wry sense of humor.

anyway this whole thing is just fascinating, I'm not sure whether it's a setup for something much bigger or not, but even alone you've created this entire world and it's very entrancing. I guess the concept of 'what the afterlife will be like' has gotten used a lot, but I think this is a new twist, and I'm excited to see where this goes. awesome writing, I'll check back soon :]

I told you I'd read this. I bet you lost faith.

"I was the best peacock ever, you know." I laughed at that. It's so you. XD

I like the premises of this tale... will there be more chapters? I definitely want moar.

Interesting. But this definitely has too much swearing to be rated K+. I hope there's another chapter--I want to see the follow-up too.

Very interesting. I like how you thought up a system for the afterlife. I'm looking forward to the next part of this story. :)