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Reviews For: The Deather Kids

blackberrydream
2008-06-29
ch 1,
abuseThis is such a fasinating idea! Now I'm curious, I really want to know more about the cards and mixing them up. I just love original ideas about the after life. Simply amazing.
whatisit
2008-06-16
ch 1,
abusewow.
summerbee
2008-04-21
ch 1,
abuse"‘Being an expert’ at something was one thing that Nine recalled very affectionately from its times as a human. There were no experts amongst slugs." - ehehehe, made me laugh. I love your wry sense of humor.

anyway this whole thing is just fascinating, I'm not sure whether it's a setup for something much bigger or not, but even alone you've created this entire world and it's very entrancing. I guess the concept of 'what the afterlife will be like' has gotten used a lot, but I think this is a new twist, and I'm excited to see where this goes. awesome writing, I'll check back soon :]
0ri
2008-04-11
ch 1,
abuseI told you I'd read this. I bet you lost faith.

"I was the best peacock ever, you know." I laughed at that. It's so you. XD

I like the premises of this tale... will there be more chapters? I definitely want moar.
Amindaya
2008-04-10
ch 1,
abuseInteresting. But this definitely has too much swearing to be rated K+. I hope there's another chapter--I want to see the follow-up too.
chocolate-philosophy
2008-04-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseVery interesting. I like how you thought up a system for the afterlife. I'm looking forward to the next part of this story. :)
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