|Reviews for The Knights Treasure|
| Jesse the Storyteller 4/19/08 . chapter 1
I like the last two lines - they aren't what you would expect.
I also like the imagery of "inscribed on his sheath and skin" and also "uniquely feathered details".
I don't really understand, though, since you said this is describing a tatoo... how it's a prize? "A Knight concealing a prize of power".
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| MidnightStar005 4/13/08 . chapter 1
I just added this one to my C2. I really love it.
| Nemonus 4/9/08 . chapter 1
I like this for "Marking everything the Knight is not", which gives him a depth of character unseen elsewhere in the descriptions which glow with praise. The rhymth's a little stiff but only practice assuages that. The character sounds interesting from the little I've gotten here.