Reviews for The Knights Treasure

Jesse the Storyteller 2008-04-19 ch 1,	abuseI like the last two lines - they aren't what you would expect. I also like the imagery of "inscribed on his sheath and skin" and also "uniquely feathered details". I don't really understand, though, since you said this is describing a tatoo... how it's a prize? "A Knight concealing a prize of power". -Jesse Attack of the review marathon! (See link in profile)
Midnight Star Lights 2008-04-13 ch 1,	abuseI just added this one to my C2. I really love it. Best Wishes
Nemonus 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abuseI like this for "Marking everything the Knight is not", which gives him a depth of character unseen elsewhere in the descriptions which glow with praise. The rhymth's a little stiff but only practice assuages that. The character sounds interesting from the little I've gotten here.