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| N Rawji 2006-07-01 ch 1,  | abusedamn! it left me hanging practically. good short fic. though, you have really vivid writing skills.. |
| pneumothorax 2005-07-11 ch 1, | abuseA little random but readable. |
| TheatrePhunk 2003-09-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great original fic. I really enjoyed it. You let us get inside Matt's head and see what he was going through. I liked the way you used Ravios for the street name. Didn't even notice the savior thing. Great job; I'll probably be reading more stories from you. |
| newtypeshadow 2003-06-27 ch 1, | abuse...cool. :smile: |
| me 2002-12-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseawww.. that was really sweet. really, it was. it makes us wonder, ya know? *is* there really someone out there, caring about *us*. sigh. so sweet, so sweet *snifflez* makes us think too. |
2002-11-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm cryign so hard right now...from this story. I don't even know why. Very touching. Thank you so much for writing that peice.... -Ashley |
| rebecca 2002-08-23 ch 1, anon. | abusevery cool. i liked how it ended. |
| Somebody 2001-06-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat vivid details, beautifully written and very touching |
| May Twinkle 2001-04-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseCool |
| Chaos Effect (I was too laz... 2001-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, you are a lucky recipient of one of my inane reviews. Okay, it was good but a little bit sad. To make it less sad you should have made Watto come to his door and say "Oooh, you happena tuh know wherea Aneekun Skywalker eeeza?" That would have been cool. And then a giant Jar Jar weight could have dropped on him. Other than that, good. |