Reviews for The Curse of Unlimited Time

salvagedstars 2008-05-04 ch 1,	abuseYou pull on heartstrings very well. Keep it up. -salvagedstars
A.M. Autography 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abuseWow. I have to say that's one of the best poems I've read in a long while. Great job. :]
Tranquil Thorns 2008-04-08 ch 1,	abuseA touching theme. I like the fact that you used rhymes here, and for the most part they worked. In some parts, though, I felt as though the words were a little forced. All the same, nice job! It can be tricky to keep a rhyme going through a really long poem. In 'she layed there', 'layed' isn't a word. I think you would use 'laid' or 'lay' here.