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| Lifeless Prophet 2008-08-25 ch 1,  | abuse"because they just don't sell like Jesus does." Wow. A line I wish I had written. Fantastic. --The Prophet-- (irony there huh?) |
| Eclipsia Soulbird 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuseOnce again, fabulous. I especially liked the lines "Some woman saw Him in a red stain on her blouse-- or was it James Dean?" At one point in the middle the rhythm seemed a bit off, but it was back on track by the end. Could just be that my rhythm was off -- I do not claim to have rhythm, lol. This doesn't offend. I really like it. Might just be my favorite -- I'm not entirely sure what strikes me so powerfully about this poem in particular, but I like it even better than the rest. |
| MissDedodakes 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abusePoor statue... ... I think Jesus would be very upset if he heard we were destroying ourselves for him. I definitly didn't find this offensive. |