Yea sounds like something inspired from Nirvana.
Short and sour.
I liked it. :)

omg *looks with shocked eyes*
talk about depressed O_O
I love it...O_O
oops XD that is the only thing I say the whole time..
but what can I say? I love all your stories so far!
you write amazingly good! you're the best

WOW...O_O why did he kill himself? huh the guy loved him..and wow seriouslyO_O

Very poetic and dark. I love that there's a twisted sort of humour behind some of the words, it's funny but at the same time it's not.

The images this conjured were so vivid I thought I'd been absorbed into the piece of writing.

OMG!! The angst… TT~TT
But seriously: this is the second time I’ve read this, and it has no reviews?? But it’s a beautiful piece! So much emotion…
I’m on this other writing site too (storywrite . com [remove spaces, yesh.] as roars.in.public, currently) and I’m very close to bugging you to join so I can promote you shamelessly.
I’ve read Sticky, and Rush, and Cherry Red (and need to review those too!! Argh…) and am definitely a fan. Erasmuss fan for life!! That’s me~