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| amandaj2351 2008-05-15 ch 3,  | abuseWOW WOW...i really liked this...i am confused though but that just means I have to read more to figure it out. can't wait till you update. it reminds me of scott westerfelds work |
| Angel of Avarice 2008-04-30 ch 3, | abuseWhat? Shane it effed up and unstable. He's seriously starting to weird me out, how does he control people like that? Strange. |
| Angel of Avarice 2008-04-30 ch 2, | abuseOh, poor Henry. I had a hamster named Henry and he died to. Shane is delusional. I guess that part of his charm. I want to know what the magician is going to do. |
| Angel of Avarice 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseShane S- Scary H- Humorous A- Angry N- Nothing E- Excitable I just did that for no reason. *smacks self* ON to the next chapter |
| CaFFy 2008-04-10 ch 3, | abuseHe's so demented. haha |
| CaFFy 2008-04-10 ch 2, | abuseo.O Interesting... Shane sounds amusing actually. |
| Quintessence-x 2008-04-10 ch 3, | abuseWHOA, DOES HE HAVE MIND CONTROL POWERS?! I can't believe that chick gave him her credit card! It made me giggle a bit though. Shane is kind of reminding me of Light (Kira) from Death Note... The way he wants to control everything, but in his eyes it's best for the entire world. So I'm guessing he's the good/bad type? This is a very different story, and I hope you continue soon! |
| Quintessence-x 2008-04-10 ch 2, | abuseWhoa! I'm still not too sure what exactly is going on, but it got like... a million times more interesting!! So then... Shane is actually not ugly, but he thinks he's ugly?! I hate when people think that! Anyway, on to the next! |
| Quintessence-x 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseI thought I'd be nice and read some of your stories too! This is definately interesting! Your writing is so good, my crappy pieces of crap don't even compare!! Anyway, I like Shane. He's quite... different. I like how he "protects" other "uglies" from humiliation, even though he seems to not like people at all. And he's right, I have not heard anyone talk about current news in Malaysia or Madagascar. But I did look them up and it showed a lot of nice pictures of both of them! So yeah, I think I'll just continue now, since this review is getting a bit long. |
| CaFFy 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseReally... weird. o-o;; I think I want to read more. |