Reviews for Bleeding Lexington

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Annerire 2008-08-03 ch 10,	abuse...**. I bet you five nonexistent bucks that Maddy's the witch. Stupid frigging werewolves...Oh, dear. I sense a plot road-bump looming ahead! Keep writing!
GoGreen! 2008-07-31 ch 10, anon.	abuseHehe. Cliffie. Can't wait for more.
Jainblu 2008-07-31 ch 10,	abuseWhat! Urgh That was a noise of fustration... grr. horrible horrible cliff hanger, battle in my head... beautiful beautiful story... okay... how could you leave this cliff hanger here :P lol Anyway I really like how original your story is. It doesn't clash with the only vampire werewolf story I've ever read, yet it has completely its own feel to it. I am also quite confused/ angry with Adam. I want to hit him... he lied =[ lol okay violent tendencies aside, I think you've done a really good job, and can't wait to read more ^_^
Faith Adeline 2008-07-31 ch 10,	abuseI liked it. Keep it up and update soon! Faith
hey 2008-07-30 ch 10, anon.	abusei reallh lic yer story
Gemma 2008-07-30 ch 10, anon.	abuseInteresting new characters. Liked it. Update soon!
MusicallyJ 2008-07-30 ch 10, anon.	abuseInteresting it wat i would say with the last chapter and i wondering how is she suppose to find that box and she needs to tell adam about wat her mom said and everything else
Estelin 2008-07-30 ch 10,	abusethis was excellent keep up the good work. i can not wait for more. ok so is madeleines' mother a supernatural or human as well as what is madeleine human or supernatural.
Jennifer Potter 2008-07-21 ch 9, anon.	abuseI like the character development of this story. Try adding more description like you did in your earlier chapters. Other than that, great job. I'll make sure to check back here next time you post a chapter. I felt really bad for Madeleine in the beginning when her mom left her. And now crazy witches and vampires are threatening her! Ek. LOL. Update soon.
AthenaFerahh 2008-07-18 ch 9, anon.	abusePoor Madeleine and Adam is a sweetie pie. :)
InsaneRomantic15 2008-07-18 ch 9,	abuseI am so glad that I'm not Madeleine! Had I ever been faced with her current predicament, I would have had a complete breakdown. Not even a cute boy like Adamn could make things better for me! Gosh. I love this story. I don't think I can give you any constructive criticism. The story is really well written, and the plot is absolute perfection. Maybe you could write with more paragraphs?
lalali mali 2008-07-17 ch 9, anon.	abuse:) your a good writer. more please.
Colie Rae 2008-07-17 ch 9,	abuseSweet story. Frankly, I was expecting a Stephanie Meyer imitation and I'm pleased that I didn't get that. Sure, there were similarities but it was your own take on the topic. I like the twists so far and you've definitely intrigued me. I was actually upset when the mom left Maddy at the train station. I assumed there was some reason but I definitely pitied her. When you are able to get my emotion into it that quickly into the story you've got something. I think the story started out a bit stronger though and is slowing down, like each chapter is more rushed as you are eager to get to the drama. Don't get me wrong, I'm eager for the drama and the secrets too but I think it just needs more...I don't even know. Maybe more description like the first chapter had? The first chapter gave you such a feel for the headmaster and even her cat. I don't know if that would improve the story but it's at least something to think about. Great work though. Hopefully you'll get a chance to update soon as I'm intriged.
Estelin 2008-07-17 ch 9,	abusethis was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait to read more.
guitar.girl.rox 2008-07-17 ch 9, anon.	abuseCool story!

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