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| Monkeydo 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseI love the metaphors and lack of explanation. I get to imagine my own story around the poem. Who? What? Why? It makes you think. |
| Random-Idiocity 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abuseGood poem. I like how the title and summary are part of the poem, and not in it. Very important that poems have flow. Keep it Up! |