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| Purpose 2008-06-10 ch 1,  | abuseA writer's haiku. Nice and well done, I've never gotten the hang of haikus. |
| xxInsanityxx 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abusethis is so true and really sweet+simple, i love haiku's! |
| jrsparkus 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseit's got the essence of a blank page, all the possibilities that it can be if only someone would be brave enough to defile the perfection of white with black ink, but i have to ask yet another question. how do you write a haiku? |
| Katrina Zeffirelli 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot! Very well done haiku- you convey your message well in so few lines. --Katrina Zeffirelli |
| Thermite 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseEmpty pages always make me feel a bit overwhelmed. Your's is an open mind. A good trait in this day and age. I don't usually like Haikus, but this one actually caught my attention and made me think. Thermite |
| silentscreamer07 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseI like your haikus! Mine never turn out right. But I like this one. In fact, it reminds me alot of what I'm going through right now. "Empty Pages" Its so simple..but I like your word choices! Lovely job as always..your such a bum. :P haha |
| Dramaqueen-is-me-14 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseThat is so good! |
| kloun doll 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abusethat's nice the stuff about being free for doing what you want, |
| Thoughtful Silence 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseSimply put, but wonderfully conveyed- I really like this. It's so optimistic... and laced with kinda child-like excitement, if you know what I mean. Good job! -Silence |
| Solitary Violet Lemon 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseI love haikus. I don't think they get enough credit for the amount of work they can be, if you do it right. Cool beans! |