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| EyesEmphatic 2008-07-13 ch 1,  | abuseBoth bitter and cheeky, if that's possible. Nice! |
| simpleplan13 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseI'm not a big fan of using look twice.. maybe change the first one to stare? or the second one... anyway Nice job... it's so true that ppl who say they dont judge often look at you with judging eyes. And I love the last line! |