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Reviews For: Tale of Yên Bái
Maturin 2008-04-11 . chapter 1
Wow, this was brilliant! I loved it! It can be hard to tell a story from two different points of view (especially when the two narrators are enemies) but you managed it very well and the focus transitioned smoothly from the Vietnamese soldier to the French one. The way you cut between the thoughts of the Vietnamese soldier and the Frenchman's letter at the end was very effective and extremely poignant. Very impressive! (",)
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