Reviews for the road to nowhere

perpetual questions 2008-04-10 ch 1,	abusegood metaphors in the first stanza. I don't like the first two lines repeated at the end. it just felt... i don't know, maybe unneeded, especially since the last line of the third stanza would make such a great ending, i think.
Random-Idiocity 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abuseGreat job on this. I especially like the first stanza towards the middle and end. Keep it Up!
East-0f-Eden 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abuseyour usage of imagery is wonderful.