Cool story. You drew the scene so well and only tell what is needed. It is perfectly cliché, but that didn't make it less enjoyable. At the end I didn't understand if he was a movie editor, or he had really done this or both, which sort of let the ending down a little for me.

Keep writing, it's always good to read well written stuff.

Well written. It manages to portray that slasher flick feel. I can almost hear the ominous music as he approaches her. :p