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| perpetual questions 2008-04-10 ch 1,  | abusei love how evocative this is, especially the wording in the second stanza. 'we still fantasize about dancing the rain' --it seemed like there was the missing word 'in' before 'the rain'. also, was it supposed to be 'staring beyond the window *of* economics class'? not sure, maybe just me. |
| Random-Idiocity 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseVery good imagery here, and a great poem. Keep it Up! |