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Kissing Concrete
2008-04-12
ch 1,
abusevery cute! this reminds me of something, i just can't put my finger on it...

hm...

little cliche, that's ok, (it rhymes!) cliche is much needed sometimes.

I like the simplicity of the poem. very nice, keep writing!
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