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| Kissing Concrete 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abusevery cute! this reminds me of something, i just can't put my finger on it... hm... little cliche, that's ok, (it rhymes!) cliche is much needed sometimes. I like the simplicity of the poem. very nice, keep writing! |