hey okay didn't i give you the idea for this. or am i thinking strange thoughts well anyway didn't know you had posted it. its awesome!! its also almost 2 in the morning and you've already heard me gush over this one after you handed me a hard copy and then proceded to yell at me about not having an email. okay off to review more

It's still so beautiful, no matter how many times I read it.

Y'know I love you, right? And I'll always love you.

I especially loved the way you did the bolds and the italicising because it worked. It made an sentence become so much more...

And the ending.

The ending was magnificent: 'I miss my father'. There's a kind of sad irony about the whole thing...because even though he abused her, she still loves him; and you explained that so well.

I was there, watching the coffin, and your writing is oh-so-beautiful.

loveyoualways!