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| PunK.cHEw.AsIAn 2008-04-11 ch 1,  | abuse"and a spider drops on my face." I love that. Love is a really terrifying thing; perfect way to describe it. You have such a different view on wording, and it's really amazing to read to work because of how uniquely you describe such common everyday emotions. Love is and invasion of the worst possible kind at times; a person can lose their sense of self, and that feeling of no longer having control over their emotions is very disconcerting, much like an invasion. Wonderful poetry as always. I'm done rambling now ;) -PunK.cHEw.AsIAn |
| Disasters Disappointment 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseILOVEIT! youmorethough |
| Random-Idiocity 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuse''All torn edges and crooked frames'' excellent line and great poem. Keep it Up! |
| losing gracie girl 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseaw. poor ayla. i really like this. the last stanza is really good.. yours until the wind changes, gg |
| Hearts Stars and Broken Bon... 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abusenight terrors SUCK. i've only had them once, and that was enough. i hope yours go away x k.X |