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| ItMustBeLove 2008-07-07 ch 40, | abuseI just finished reading this in one sitting, and I must say, I was completely blown away by this story. At first, I thought it was just an interesting concept, but somewhere along the line the story got deeper, albeit more far-fetched. I love the way you managed to add a big twist without it being hokey or just plain lame. And the whole time I felt really in love with the characters, which is the ultimate sign of enjoying a story-when you love the characters like real people. So, good job :D |
| Catseye*Rose 2008-07-05 ch 40, | abuseI really liked reading that. I knew it would be angsty...but the suicide caught me COMPLETELY off guard O_O Up until then it was pretty happy, despite the slight angst...then BAM! But I guess that was the point? Anyway, I liked the story and the characters a lot. ^^ |
| rebabe 2008-06-21 ch 40, | abusethis was a really good story if thats the end it was great and if it wasnt then i hope you keep going and doing well ^-^ |
| forty-two dreams 2008-05-15 ch 40, | abuseWell, you jumped the shark. Looks like you ran out of things to do with this one and did the obvious dramatic thing. But your writing is pretty good. I did finish it and all, even though it's really late at night. Maybe I'll read some more of your stuff tomorrow. |
| mythlady11 2008-04-16 ch 40, | abuseMade me sad and made me angry, but I loved it. Good job. |
| mythlady11 2008-04-16 ch 39, | abusethis made me sad. sad and angry. but i loved it. good job. |