This is so unique and original. I love the ironic twist you've put on at the end
"I wondered if I had just imagined the faint smile on his face when I told him that I loved him."
It is very metaphoric. Yet sad. It is a classic love story, and i cannot help but wonder if the whole story is symboic of something deeper within the girl.


-T. B. McNeely

WOW! thats all i can say.

okay come on when have i ever been able to express myself in one word. never so now i will proceed with my rant

Holy ** you must tell what gave you the inspiration(do not mock my bad spelling!, is it spelled right?) its so beatifully described i mean the way it just flows you can just picture him but not because you give the sence that he's to beatiful to describe. Its amazing. the girl reminds me of you sorta. you always go for guys that are unatainable and jerks.

That was illegally beautiful.

It's almost sinful.

The way you've captured the angel is pretty, and yet you've also written about his 'bloody beauty', his perfection.

This is probably one of the most exquisite gems of fiction I have ever to read in my life. I'd spam you if only you accepted anonymous reviews.

I love you~

That was beautifully written; some would say a masterpiece. Though short, I enjoyed reading it, and it’s unique, fantasy-like twist made it stand out from the high-school-romances that seem to litter this area. The descriptions were vivid and delicate. This story makes me wonder if it is a metaphor for something else; it could certainly be put into that context, but so could most stories, if you think about it for long enough.

A wonderful short piece that leaves you wanting more, and the love that the girl (I am assuming she is a girl) feels for ‘her’ angel is written with clarity; despite that the fact that the angel appears inanimate in your story, it is a perfectly believable and tangible love.

All in all, I loved it, and will now be mobbing your userpage for more stories. :)

squeeks x

Nice writing, it'd be awesome if it was longer. I'm a fan of fallen angels *grins*

Cheers,

eyesofahuntress

nice~!

i also wrote a story related to fallen angel...but ur one seems way better than mine >