great story!! Can't wait to find out what happens next!

plz update i love this story! :)

wow! this is really, really well written. I was expecting something a lot different when I opened this story, but i like your originality. please update soon! I'll be watching for you ;)

Ha ha No wonder Duke's a bit frustrated with her. She's being a real hot head.

Whoa, is this a horror story?

I like this story, it deviates somewhat from the fictionpress norm which is so refreshing. It isn't glorified highschool dramma. Keep writing.

At least she's protected... and her theory about her being the only one in danger makes sense.
Will they use the Ouija, or are dreams and candles enough?
Greetings!

Oh my gosh.
This is by far, my favorite story here on Fictionpress.
I'm a big fan of the supernatural and an even bigger fan of great writing, so this story takes the cake.
I can't wait for the next chapter to see what really got to Jack and what's getting to Tegan.
10/10!

Hello!
Great Chapter! I loved it.
But... I have a question: did hoy come up with those prayers, orejas where did hoy fine them?

I love Duke. He's so patient and helpful!

Hello!

This is a very nice story, I really liked reading those 13 chapters.
I love your characters, they're so human, so complex!
Please, keep writing, I promise yo follow it 'till the end.

YES YES YES. i love your story write more please i'm begging you on my knees please please please please...

Hey, this is a good story, although I am confused by bits of it. You've said that she was seven when her uncle died, but then said again that it was only seven years ago. That would make her fourteen - and I think it says somewhere on the summary that she's about to start her senior year?

Also, the name Tegan - while it may be unusual in the South, is actually a very common name elsewhere. For instance in Australia, where I come from, it's quite common - there were five girls out of about a hundred in my grade alone back in high school with the name. Although, they would have been born in the late eighties/early nineties, and I suppose if your protagonist is fourteen, the name could have died off...

Another thing - the way you place actions and dialogue of seperate characters together is sometimes confusing. For instance (I can't be bothered going back for a specific example, so I'll make one up - sorry), you might have Duke saying something, then put 'I shrugged' at the end of the same line. If it's a different character, it should be on a seperate line/paragraph. So it would be 'I shrugged' and then whatever Tegan responds with.

But yeah, it's quite interesting so far.Finding it quietly amusing that Tegan thinks she's better than everybody else, even though she says 'ya'll'. Haha. :-)

Weiirrdd! But fantastically intriguing at the same time. :]
Keep it up!!

*flail* You take too long to update. ; - ;
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