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Reviews For: Eden

Amethyst Leirda PhotoMaster 2008-04-16 ch 9,	abuseWow, this is marvolous! It's been a long time since I've reviewed your work and let me tell you that I've missed it! I've never read this subject in such a way! One of my favorites so far! This and your Paper Maidens!
Falcon 2008-04-11 ch 9, anon.	abuseAmber-loo! I want to print it out and shove it at people and say "READ IT NOW, YOU CONFUSED PEOPLES AND SEE THE TRUTH!" My goodness, if Vince ever asks us to bring in any work, I will make you bring this. If you don't, then I will bring it for you. Cha? Okay. And by "see the truth" I mean that this is a brilliant tale of Eden and (even if it's seriously supposed to be metaphorically about you, you tortured soul) it really does make eating the apple seem like a last resort to get out of something terrible, which is not how the story is told (um, ever). Favorites!! Falcon-loo-hoo
Jennifer 2008-04-10 ch 9,	abuseMY TOP FAVORITE! I LOVE IT! The imagery is flawless And oh, everything is perfect! There is no specific fav. but if it had to be, it'd be 9. EEK! I loev this!!
Sexy vampirechick 2008-04-10 ch 2,	abuseWow!A very very nice piece.The repetition of the line "I can hear them talking" added a lot of strength to the poem. I can't really describe as which part I liked best,because the whole entire poem is just amazing.
BlackestOpal 2008-04-10 ch 9,	abuseThis is absolutely amazing. How do you only have one review? Usually I try to point out what I liked best, but I can't pick. There aren't lines that stand out because it all stands out. This is brilliant. This is amazing!
demonsdisciple 2008-04-09 ch 8,	abuseWhoa, very powerful, very passionate. I love the ones that are one-liners. Great imagery and word choice and creative use of punctuation like "c.r.a.c.k". I think there are two spelling errors though I don't know if they were intentional: "screaming myself horse"- hoarse? and "I know I'm loosing"- losing? Wonderful job, overall.

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