Freebie!

Ok. Poetry is *not* my forte. However, I like the emotion behind it, as it really shines clearly what it is that you are trying to say. And I really dig the imagery with the chair and the playground swing.

It seems your ending is very... abrupt? I don't know if it was supposed to be like that, or if there was more that was supposed to go there. But, maybe smoothing that over would help it overall.

--Rachel!