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three.word.lies 2008-09-14 . chapter 2
i love the last line.
three.word.lies 2008-09-14 . chapter 1
wow, moving.
i love haikus, only if they're written well, with the right amount of impact on the reader.
this is perfect.
Shiro.Kokoro 2008-08-09 . chapter 1
So I kinda normally hate haiku's, but this is pretty cool. Actually, very cool. I like it.

~Shiro♥
a silenced revolution 2008-04-10 . chapter 1
I like the double entendre of 'screwing with fire' and the confusing idea of 'they raped each other'. Interesting haiku.
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