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| mandya1313 2008-06-23 ch 3,  | abusecool story update soon |
| Coracao Selvagem 2008-06-10 ch 3, | abuseWow... I've sunk to stalking. I really really like this. And I laughed so loudly when Tomah called that boy a peasant and was about to get his ass killed. I enjoyed the second chapter as well. It gave background into the world Tomah lives, and the conflicts, the conflict is just awesome. Coracao Great story, love. |
| Enaid 2008-05-28 ch 3, | abuseloving the story! it seems so complex and i cannot wait until all the pieces fall into place. First the situation in the "modern" world and then freecia?? Also i think it is great how you don't start it with tomah being pulled into another world so that the reader can imagine how it happened. your work is amazing and i hope that the 5 review quota is reached so that an update will happen soon ^-^enaid |
| Angel of Ink 2008-05-22 ch 3, | abuseI like your fantasy stories. You should write more of them. >. |
| Endowment's Seraph 2008-04-29 ch 3, | abuseI like this story too. It's kinda like your other one, but different enough that it's not redundent. I can't wait to read more ~Mel |
| Which Way To Nowhere 2008-04-19 ch 3, | abuseI know i havent reviewed in a while i just havent been around but OH MY FUCKING GOD i love this story not even joking even though i am sad that you have not finished assassinating a teenage drama king this story honestly i started histarically laughing in the prologue but love it update soon and IM GLAD YOUR BACK! ~nacomis |
| Baelles 2008-04-18 ch 3, | abuseHehe, what can I say? I love your writing! Thanks for checking up on my writing. I haven't really payed much attention to my story but now that you've brought it up, I'm probably gonna start writing for it again. =) Now, about this chapter: Aww, this is sad. So, if Tomah ever goes back, his mom and maybe his dad will be gone? =( I can't wait to find out what happens! |
| Simply Lindsey 2008-04-14 ch 3, | abuseI love it. It's great! |
| Kjersti 2008-04-14 ch 3, anon. | abuseGreat chapter. I feel sorry for Felise. :( Can't wait to read more! (Aw, you're so sweet. :D) "In medias res" = the story starts directly in the action, without any introduction. Did that make more sense? :) |
| peaceinafrica 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseWow. Well-written. This is the first review all day where I haven't complained about were versus where or its versus it's. I like it a lot. The dialogue is very entertaining. It's definitely a keeper, so do keep writing. |
| Baelles 2008-04-12 ch 2, | abuseI absolutely love this. Tomah seems so adorable even though he is a bit of a spoiled brat. I like him though, and I think the interaction between him and Sarah is cute. Looking forward to reading more from you. |
| Kjersti 2008-04-11 ch 2, anon. | abuseHm... I'm still trying to figure out this story. The in medias res-stuff is really doing my head in. Can't wait to read more, though. :D |
| Simply Lindsey 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseI loved it! I'd like to see more. It looks interesting! |
| Hell Butterfly 2008-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice. I like. Please post more ^_^ |
| Kjersti 2008-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell, this story certainly has entertainment potential. I'm supporting it if you decide to write more. ;) |